You Improved, Congratulation,
Less Backflip but it's unrealistic again, well, probably the first time i like your video, the story is not really great (start) but it was okay, and some Original Ideas, I Hope to see Moreof you, Personnally i prefer the RedBlack Man, i forgot his name, if you use for the end the Man who he brought it, it will have no sence. Just saying : Need a little effort for some mouvement.